Brilliant. Your erotic rendition took excessive poetic licence. God created Adam first, so Eve could not law claim or ownership to Eden. She did not exist.
Adam had his own sex stick. The serpent had its own too. Can they be the same? Methinks not! The serpent as teacher is a version closer to the factual sequence. Perhaps the rib of Adam stopped him from feeling and its removal made him feel again.
All said and done a brilliant erotic piece!
Cheers.
IBK
On 5 April 2016 at 13:14, Chidi Anthony Opara <chidi.opara@gmail.com> wrote:
--By Chidi Anthony Opara
The gate of Eve's eden
Opened.
Eve's eden fascinated Adam
And fascinated the Serpent.
The Serpent
Crawled to the entrance
And inserted its sex stick
Into the open eden,
Twisting the sex stick
Like the sex stick
Of a sex starved lover,
Its eyes rolling in pleasure.
Eve moaned in pleasure,
Adam watched with pleasure
And learned.
The Serpent withdrew,
Leaving Eve
At the edge of orgasm.
Eve beckoned,
Adam brought her
To the pleasure of orgasm.
From the sky
A stern voice said;
"You have sinned,
Eve's eden not for pleasure,
Tis for bringing forth flowers.
This sin will be called;
The original sin."
(Poem presented as social service, all rights reserved).
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