Thursday, September 16, 2010

Re: USA Africa Dialogue Series - Goodluck Jonathan Formally Makes a Declaration of Intent For The 2011 Presidential Race

Please, Ike, this is a little different. Don't cut Jonathan any slack. We all mangle the white man's language regularly, either in the form of typos or errors of grammar. I can't even guarantee that this post of mine would not have a grammatical error or typo. That's not the issue. The issue is that if I had the resources to employ a professional speech writer and a professional editor/proofreader like Dr. Jonathan has, and if I was the president of a country and a man whose every gesture has symbolic and practical ramifications in and out of his country, I would make absolutely sure that no official, written communication of mine has any grammatical or typographical error. Viewed in that context, Jonathan's habitual mangling of English in his prepared remarks, speeches, and press releases is inexcusable.  Your contention about the president being a scientist would be valid if this was a verbal, extemporaneous speech. It wasn't. For the record, Jonathan's spoken English is terrible even for a scientist! But that doesn't bother me, as even native speakers of English are known to butcher the language in their verbal communication.This was a written speech, prepared by his PAID speechwriters. The speechwriters are mediocre at best and should be fired if they won't or can't do their job. Abeg let's not make light of issues that may point to an even more serious malaise. What message will his habitually bad grammar send to our school boys and girls--that ability to write (and speak) good English is not necessary for success in this globalizing, competitive, English-denominated economy? 

On Thu, Sep 16, 2010 at 10:35 AM, Emmanuel Udogu <udoguei@appstate.edu> wrote:
In the words of professor A. B. Assensoh, we occasionally need a "comic relief" from our stressful vocations. As one who has mangled the English language several times, I do sympathize with the president (a scientist by training). Perhaps, he should communicate with us in pidgin English.  In fact, it goes without saying that President Obasanjo (alias Uncle Sege) did a great number on us at the meet "Nigerians-in-the-Diaspora" conference that was held in Atlanta several years ago.  His pidgin English was,  in truth, smooth and  as one with a "Ph.D." in Warri  (Delta state) pidgin English I gave him an A. Besides, it is said that there is no "correction" in pidgin English (or pidgin English no get correction-o). So, let the President deliver his Independence Day message to the nation in "sweet" pidgin English--bo!

Ike Udogu

Moses Ebe Ochonu wrote:
See, Tony, I even missed that one. How about "forth coming" instead of "forthcoming"? How about this obvious subject-verb disagreement: "I understand from some of your mails that there *has* been some small improvement*s*"? And I didn't even comb through the speech carefully. This grammatical and orthographic sloppiness has become a pattern with Jonathan. I've yet to read a speech he has given that was not riddled with grammatical errors of various kinds. Is it too much to ask that the speech of the president of Nigeria be proofread thoroughly before delivery and release? More importantly, what does this cavalier attitude to communication and writing tell us about Jonathan?
On Wed, Sep 15, 2010 at 9:54 AM, Tony Agbali <attahagbl@yahoo.com <mailto:attahagbl@yahoo.com>> wrote:

   He says he would be making a formal declaration on September 18th,
   2011! The elections would have been over by then!!! Is that one
   that would make Pius Adesanmi cringe to see printer demon- in need
   of deliverance!

   --- On *Wed, 9/15/10, Shola Adenekan /<sholaadenekan@gmail.com
   <mailto:sholaadenekan@gmail.com>>/* wrote:


       From: Shola Adenekan <sholaadenekan@gmail.com
       <mailto:sholaadenekan@gmail.com>>

       Subject: USA Africa Dialogue Series - Goodluck Jonathan
       Formally Makes a Declaration of Intent For The 2011
       Presidential Race
       To: "usaafricadialogue" <USAAfricaDialogue@googlegroups.com
       <mailto:USAAfricaDialogue@googlegroups.com>>,
       NIgerianWorldForum@yahoogroups.com
       <mailto:NIgerianWorldForum@yahoogroups.com>

       Date: Wednesday, September 15, 2010, 4:05 AM


           Declaration of Intent For The 2011 Presidential Race

       by Goodluck Jonathan
       <http://www.facebook.com/jonathangoodluck> on Wednesday, 15

       September 2010 at 09:55
       Dear compatriots, four months ago, providence placed me at the
       leadership of our dear country, following the untimely death
       of our dear former President, my brother and leader, President
       Umaru Musa Yar'adua. It was a very solemn and trying moment
       for me personally and for the country as a whole. My immediate
       task and priority was and still remains to give the nation
       purposeful leadership and to focus on the priorities of our
       administration in order to maintain national peace and
       stability and pursue our key development priorities. In these
       few months as leader of the country, I have concentrated on
       managing the affairs of the nation, and resisted all efforts
       to respond to the drums of partisan politics which have been
       sounding very loud across the land. As President and leader of
       government, I decided not to place partisan politics above the
       immediate needs and priorities of our people. I came under
       intense pressure to make a declaration concerning my political
       future, but declined to do so because that would have
       immediately distracted us from all the development initiatives
       we have accomplished so far. I therefore told Nigerians to
       give me time to concentrate on my work and that at the
       appropriate time I would make a public statement on my
       political future after due consultations with all the segments
       and leaders of our nation.
                Today, I confirm that after wide and thorough consultations
       spanning the six geo-political zones that make up Nigeria,
       with members of my family, my party, the opposition, civil
       society, the Private Sector, members of the Labour Unions,
       religious leaders, youths and student groups and our revered
       traditional institutions, I Goodluck Ebele Jonathan by the
       grace of God hereby offer myself and my services to the
       Nigerian people as a candidate for the office of President in
       the forth coming 2011 elections. In presenting myself for
       service, I make no pretense that I have a magic wand that will
       solve all of Nigeria's problems or that I am the most
       intelligent Nigerian. Far from it. What I do promise is this –
       If I am elected President in 2011, I will make a covenant with
       you the Nigerian people to always do right by you, to tell you
       the truth at all times, to carry you along and most
       importantly to listen to you, fellow citizens in our
       communities and also those of you on this page. I do not want
       to win your affections by giving you promises of things I
       would do in the future which others before me have given and
       which have largely been unfulfilled. Rather, I would want you
       to judge me by my records. Since God Almighty and yourselves
       permitted me to serve you in the present capacity, I have
       busied myself with setting Nigeria on the path of peace and
       progress.
                My team and I made no promises on adequate fuel supply in
       Nigeria. We simply did what was expected of those who govern,
       we delivered it, and you are living witnesses to that. We made
       no promise to revamp the textile industry. We delivered a
       bailout package worth 150 billion naira that is being
       dispensed as I write. We made no promises of securing the
       highest U.S Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) aviation
       clearance, the Category 1 Certificate which enables Nigerian
       registered airlines to fly to ANY U.S city. We delivered. We
       made no promise to give Nigeria a brand new INEC under a
       proven God-fearing and incorruptible leader. We placed Nigeria
       first and delivered. We made no promises of protecting your
       loans, deposits and investments in the banking industry over
       and beyond what is covered under the Nigerian Deposit
       Insurance Scheme. We delivered it via AMCON. Rather than tell
       you what we could do to improve power, this administration
       demonstrated it by initiating a brand new national Super Grid
       as well as launching a concrete Road Map to the Power Sector
       with realistic goals tied to realistic dates. I understand
       from some of your mails that there has been some small
       improvements in electricity supply in some communities. We met
       an economy that was beginning to slow due to the global
       recession. Today, the economy has verifiably grown by 7% this
       half year ending in June.
                I know you are tired of empty promises, so I will make only
       one promise to you today. The only promise I make to you my
       friends, fellow citizens and Nigeria, is to promise LESS and
       deliver MORE if I am elected. I call on you to join me to work
       together in harmony and synergy to forge a nation where we
       understand our differences instead of pretending they do not
       exist and work towards a perfect union founded on
       transparency, equity and justice. A nation that is on her way
       to repairing her International reputation and project to the
       world that things have changed and the people of Nigeria have
       now taken Nigeria back from a few into the hands of her people
       who are eager, very eager to pull her weight in the forward
       movement of the African continent and the world in the pursuit
       of peace, prosperity and happiness.
                I will by the special grace of God be making a formal
       declaration to this effect at the Eagle's Square, Abuja, on
       Saturday 18 September 2011.
                I call on you my friends on this page and all Nigerians to
       give me your support and prayers so that together we can
       liberate our country from the confines and self –inflicted
       wounds and limitations of the past. My dear friends and fellow
       citizens, to borrow an often used slogan by our youths, please
       join me in proclaiming: Forward Ever, Backward Never! Please
       let us all unite across tongue and creed to move our long
       suffering nation forward together. I thank you and may God
       bless our country Nigeria. --
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